Thursday, March 31, 2016

Term1 values

T1 handwriting

Handwriting in my book.

        
     Practicing on my iPad  with a stylus.

  
Something I did well was my sloping 
                                                                                          
Something I'm working on is my keeping my sizes even.

Monday, March 21, 2016

Writing: poetry T1

WALT Use personification and metaphors to create pictures for our reader 
Personification is when you talk or write about a object as if it was a person


Metaphor is when you say  an object is something it is not and then you tell us why you think it is like that    

Something I did well was my personification. Something I need to work on is my full stops.

Tuesday, March 1, 2016

Writing term1 : recount

WALT: Use a variety of sentence forms to grab the readers  attention.


WALT use punctuation correctly at the begging  and end of of sentences.

I think I did my punctuation well.
I'm still working on my order words.